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2nd Year Logo - Andrew Moss
« on: March 24, 2016, 09:46:18 am »
Ya want soup?

We got soup.

It's a logo I made using N particles. I forgot lighting and due to a problem with the liquid collapsing in on itself I had to loop it at the end.
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Re: 2nd Year Logo - Andrew Moss
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2016, 10:12:12 am »
I like how you made the liquid kinda chunky like a stew

P.S I love the captions
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« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2016, 10:13:43 am »
I mentioned during critique to add more lighting to the scene,but other than that the animation looks cool!

also needs more soup
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« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2016, 10:35:57 am »
I like the scene but there's something that caught my eye which is the waiter's hand, not sure if the body is out of the camera which I'm guessing or just a floating hand pouring soup. Also I forgot to mention that there's no spoon on the table which can be use for eating soup.

Overall, love the scene with its textures, dynamics soup pouring and rendered models.  ;D
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Re: 2nd Year Logo - Andrew Moss
« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2016, 07:39:19 am »
The texture of the soup is really good, thick and chunky. However the title sequence is not very clear and cuts off too short.
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