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Career Resources / "15 Pro Tips For Crafting the Perfect Showreel"« on: February 16, 2017, 02:28:54 pm »2
Turn in / Re: WIP Character Model« on: February 03, 2017, 09:51:54 am »
Try and round out the blocky edges of the wings and make them taper a little more at the ends. This will help them look more believable. Watch out for the same problem on the otrso too.
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Turn in / Re: UPDATE ON JOE« on: February 03, 2017, 09:49:19 am »
Try and smooth out some of your obvious seams especially on the upper arms and moustache.
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WIP / Re: WIP - y'all like alien ladies?« on: February 03, 2017, 09:46:53 am »
Looking good so far. You sill have a lot to do though. Make sure your edge flow is right especially around the eyes and mouth and where the limbs attach. Good work!
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WIP / Re: GER-AF MODEL 2k17 WIP« on: February 03, 2017, 09:43:18 am »
The neck looks a little thick. Also don't forget the hooves.
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Turn in / Re: WIP Chracter Model« on: February 03, 2017, 09:41:02 am »
Try to round our some of your hard corners, especially around the torso and limbs.
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WIP / Re: Bee Idol Character Progress! - Micah Schmidt« on: February 03, 2017, 09:37:38 am »
Really great work! I would suggest adding a little more to the textures. Maybe some indications of fur, if she's a furry bee, or any other kind of noise to breakup the flat fields of color. Maybe try to darken some of the areas that will be indented to add some contour. Something like that.
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Turn in / Re: Character Model TURTLE MAN!!!« on: February 03, 2017, 09:24:48 am »
He looks good so far. It's a little hard to see detail from this distance, but he looks promising.
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Turn in / Re: Oakley, the best character of All Time« on: February 03, 2017, 09:21:03 am »
Nice work so far. I think you may need to move your arms away from the body in more of an "A" shape. You could run into problems rigging this character with the arm so close to the body. I'd also like to see a more exaggerated bend in the legs, more like your reference.
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Turn in / Re: My character progress« on: February 03, 2017, 09:15:33 am »
Looking good so far. Just remember the character does eventually have to speak. Make sure you have enough detail in the face to allow for that.
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WIP / Re: Modeling progress ._.« on: February 03, 2017, 09:12:58 am »
Very nice work! Don't forget the feet.
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WIP / Re: Rework WIP Cyclops« on: February 03, 2017, 09:10:36 am »
You've got really good shapes and proportions. Check your edge loops.
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WIP / Re: Character Base Model« on: February 03, 2017, 09:06:56 am »
Nice so far. I like his chubby cheeks.
Try to smooth out the seams between the limbs and the torso.
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WIP / Re: Character Progress« on: February 03, 2017, 09:04:57 am »
He's adorable!
Watch out for his torso, though. It looks like it may need to be rounded out a bit more. It's looking a little flat on the front and side.
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WIP / Re: Foxy Lou WIP« on: February 03, 2017, 09:02:28 am »
Nice proprtions. She's looking a little square though. Try rounding out her sides a bit.
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