Our animation history project was on limited animation. Specifically we focused more towards the Hanna Barbera cartoon studio. The characters, title card, background, and background objects were made in Photoshop, and everything was animated in After Effects. The production was looking grim near the end, but Ezequiel had a personal copy of After Effects and was able to do extra work us other two group members weren't able to do outside of school. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Ue4bjxLDOs
The background image you used works really well with the camera angle you have. The lighting is okay. I can tell what your objects are when they're listed, but if I wasn't told what the objects were, I would only be able to notice the straw hat and the flower/vase.
You did a great job on your textures! The edges on some of your objects are showing hard. Increasing the amount of edges on certain areas of your objects with something like the Multi-Cut Tool or the Insert Edge Tool and bringing out those new edges will make your objects look more round and more realistic. If I was trying to convey a "sweet" theme, I would change up the colors used in the background and the lighting to something closer to the colors in the below example.
There isn't much of a correlation between the sizes of your objects, like the wooden toy train seems to be too big when compared to the fishing pole. The lighting is good, and the color of the wall and floor works well with your objects, but the pattern is stretched out, making it seem unrealistic. The texture on the wall and floor could've been two different textures to add differentiation and to make the scene look more like a room.
The camera angle and lighting looks good. You should add some vertices/edges to your objects (like the grip of the gun, the frying pan, the food) and move them around to make the objects a little rounder instead of having more rectangular edges.
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