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Messages - IanHutchison
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« on: May 15, 2016, 03:48:49 pm »
I like how much effort you put into the stage, putting the video on the screens, and the lights. I feel like adding the video of the actual faint music video is a bit jarring, since the projector is showing real people and the rest of the scene is animated. Also, I think you should've made the camera closer to the people dancing, at certain points.
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« on: May 15, 2016, 03:29:50 pm »
more dynamic camera movements would make it better, I think. I think closing in on him so we could see his movements better would be cool, The effects are pretty well done, but a scottish dance in a cannon seems like a strange combination to me. But that's just me I guess.
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« on: May 15, 2016, 03:25:11 pm »
movements are great I think the character could've been textured better, and maybe a bit more going on with the background
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« on: May 13, 2016, 08:22:39 pm »
Like the background and use of music, really syncs with the dance. Shadows would've helped, though.
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« on: May 13, 2016, 02:08:33 pm »
Guess what, dorks? This is my final dancing animation. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69NAcXj5y_gI like the dance itself, but it's a bit too slow and doesn't necessarily match up with the music, he kind of floats a bit towards the ending, which I only noticed after I finished up rendering. Also the light could've been brighter, but I like how I captured his movement, the camera work, and the shadows. Critique away. Also, you're not dorks, you're all beautiful and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
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« on: May 04, 2016, 12:58:22 pm »
We'll never know. It was all an elaborate trick pulled by the government or something.
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« on: May 02, 2016, 11:56:47 am »
also I think the head could be bigger to match the body
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« on: May 02, 2016, 11:53:13 am »
I like her body, but her face looks a bit off to me. I think it's the expression matched with the neutral body positioning. it looks like she's screaming but the body position is all neutral like.
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« on: April 19, 2016, 11:58:54 am »
Oh! and while I think the arm cannon is pretty nice, I think the actual arm part could've had more detail to it.
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« on: April 19, 2016, 11:57:49 am »
looks nice, bud. I especially like how the door opens, and how it looks like it could've come from the game in a sense. I think the areas in Metroid Prime are less like the environment you made, though. Prime's areas are more like an abandoned rocky planet. But then again, I've only gotten up to Phendrana Drifts, so I haven't gotten near the end of the game.
But Prime sort of has this isolated feel to it, that I think this is missing. This feels more like Portal to me than Prime I guess. I would've made things darker, and maybe make the enemy appear in a less "I just popped in, here I am lol" kinda way. But it's a great start, I can understand it isn't finished.
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« on: April 13, 2016, 01:09:44 pm »
also it was really well done, obviously.
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« on: April 13, 2016, 01:08:06 pm »
there were a ton of great ones, but I think AGolden's is my personal favorite because it makes me laugh
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« on: April 11, 2016, 06:59:49 pm »
yeah, it's pretty well done, my man.
It's distracting his eyes are constantly closed, but the head moves pretty well, and the lip sync is pretty fantastic, too.
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« on: April 11, 2016, 02:27:03 pm »
lip sync is spot on, but it needs more expression in the eyes and more movement in the head.
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« on: April 11, 2016, 02:21:14 pm »
probably my favorite. I especially like how his neck and head kinda extend at the first line, and the movement with the second line. It's all really good, though.
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