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Turn in / Re: DanceDanceWut
« on: May 16, 2017, 09:26:33 pm »
Aside from lighting the scene a little better, I love the constant movement of the character. It never feels like it is frozen. Also your taste in music is excellent!

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Turn in / Re: DanceDanceWut« on: May 16, 2017, 09:26:33 pm »
Aside from lighting the scene a little better, I love the constant movement of the character. It never feels like it is frozen. Also your taste in music is excellent!
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Turn in / Re: Alvilda's Last Dance - Gwyn Thomson Final« on: May 16, 2017, 09:20:22 pm »
Minus a couple of distortions with the model (i feel you're pain) the animation is really nice and I love how smoothly the whole dance flows!
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Turn in / Re: Dance Final! :3« on: May 16, 2017, 09:10:35 pm »
You did such a good job matching the movements to that in the video and i love the song choice. Fantastic job. I think some brighter lighting would help, but overall this looks great!
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h602q6XtLqs&feature=youtu.be
*cries* I had to many ideas but not enough time. Also I'm not sure why the footage gets fuzzy at certain points..... If I get the chance I'm going to finish the animation over summer and I'll most likely post the full version. That's about all for now, so critique away 5
Turn in / Re: Mass Effect/Overwatch Crossover Lipsync« on: April 24, 2017, 09:36:28 pm »
I found this to be one of the best facial animations because of all the movements you added! The only thing I would fix next time is the phonemes when she says the word "place." It seems like she stopped talking at the end but the dialogue continued for a second. Aside from that I really love your character and I look forward to seeing her dance!
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Turn in / Re: FacialAnimation« on: April 24, 2017, 09:29:58 pm »
I love how instead of doing just a bust of the character you chose to show more of the character and adding in those small hand movements really add to your characters mood.
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Turn in / Re: she can t0lk« on: April 24, 2017, 09:26:59 pm »
I think having a little head movement and having the jaw rotate with the dialogue can help bring your character to life, but over all you did a great job. (Also I love how the lips are shiny, it makes it look like she is wearing lip gloss)
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Turn in / Ai Facial Animation« on: April 24, 2017, 09:23:20 pm »
https://youtu.be/uk5m7WvZf0o
Here is my facial animation of Ai! The quote is from a show called RWBY and I chose it because it fit in with the idea of how my character isn't actually a real human. If I had more time I would've fixed some of the head movements but for the most part I'm happy with how it came out! 9
Turn in / Re: Micah Schmidt Character Animation Roll« on: April 10, 2017, 08:27:23 pm »
I am honestly in shock with how good the animation is! I love your character's over all design and to see that you even rigged the wings is quite impressive. I don't really have any criticism; Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing how you make your character talk!
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Turn in / Re: g.thomson // did somebody say BACKFLIP« on: April 10, 2017, 08:21:46 pm »
I love how she stays consistent throughout the walk and the back flip isn't as bad as you made it out to be. I think to give her more life, some shoulder or torso swaying in the walk will really help. Aside from that it looks like you've got a good grasp on animating!
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Turn in / Backflip & Circle Walk« on: April 10, 2017, 08:18:09 pm »
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAbfo9VPSnU&feature=youtu.be
I was going to use my original character that I modeled but Maya had other ideas (if you want to see the pictures just ask, it was a tragically funny accident) so instead I used this model. There are definitely some things I'd want to change, but for the most part I'm happy and I'm finally getting the hang of key animating. 12
Turn in / Re: Circle/Backflip Animation« on: April 10, 2017, 08:13:52 pm »
I love how the back flip turned out! As for the walk cycle I think the pacing could use a little work cause she speeds up a little but otherwise this is really good
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Turn in / Re: Me Model of Turn Around lmao« on: February 14, 2017, 07:28:08 pm »
I can not tell you how much I love your character!!! They are so cute and I love how well you translated your art style from 2d to 3d. I look forward to seeing you animate Eitel's tail and if you need any help at all just let me know ^-^
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Turn in / Re: *gasp* Alvilda Turnaround« on: February 14, 2017, 07:04:27 pm »
Despite her having a very blocky look, it works out well for your character and her design is so intriguing! You did a fantastic job with her armor and keeping everything proportionate. I truly can't wait to see what you do with your character and would love to know more about her!
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Turn in / Re: Melody W. - Seth Weeks (Final Project)« on: February 14, 2017, 06:57:10 pm »
You did a wonderful job modeling Melody and keeping the proportions! The hair is exquisite and the colors you chose compliment her well. I'm not sure if it's the lighting or textures, but when she is in the side view, her skin looks extremely shiny, so if you could adjust that next time you render her it will look flawless!
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