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General Category => Turn in => Topic started by: Ryan.J.Thomspon on November 04, 2016, 01:42:11 pm

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: Charles on November 10, 2016, 12:45:47 pm

I like the how you added a rug on the floor

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: SarahSenpai on November 10, 2016, 12:28:38 pm

The texturing is great, however I don't get a "spooky" feeling from this.

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: ✨Ella Gonzalez✨ on November 07, 2016, 01:58:06 pm

I love how, unlike others, you chose to actually light the room with the use of the hanging lamp along with adding a rug! The only thing I'd recommend is choosing a more subtle wallpaper for the walls, so that all the textures don't pull away focus from the focal point. Otherwise, great job!

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: Raymond C's All on November 07, 2016, 01:16:01 pm

My only problem with this is the lighting. It shows that the overhead light is where the light source is. But the shadows suggest that the light is coming from the window.

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: John Molina on November 07, 2016, 12:42:09 pm

Textures on walls, carpet, pillars, etc. are fairly decent. Only recommendation I give is try to even the main light with the main light source. (The window I presume) All in all good job. - John M.

Title: Re: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: Rocket Angel on November 07, 2016, 12:33:53 pm

The rug is so beautiful but the back wall looks a little strange. Is it the same texture as the surrounding walls?

Title: Haunted Hallway 2016
Post by: Ryan.J.Thomspon on November 04, 2016, 01:42:11 pm

http://savagegrizzly.deviantart.com/art/DankHallwayFinal-643952288?ga_submit_new=10%253A1478287431