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General Category => Turn in => Topic started by: astrid_cid on November 04, 2016, 12:09:58 pm

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: Malenki Mitchi on November 10, 2016, 12:48:40 pm

Everything is textured & modeled really well! :) Just zoom in a little to focus more on the objects

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: JakeTheGreat on November 10, 2016, 12:38:20 pm

I think I agree with everyone else and say the lighting could be improved, but that's because I can't find much else to critique. You did a stellar job modeling and texturing everything. The only other issue is that you're an Angels fan and not a Cubs fan.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: SarahSenpai on November 10, 2016, 12:34:48 pm

Everything is well modeled. I just think it needs a little more light like illuminating the lamp slightly like its on?

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: JesseMartinez on November 07, 2016, 12:27:35 pm

It looks good, the only thing I can say is zoom in.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: Jordan Griffin on November 07, 2016, 12:10:35 pm

Your still life looks really great, but I would suggest that you zoom in a little more but other than that it looks amazing.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: Raymond C's All on November 07, 2016, 12:06:16 pm

It all looks good. Maybe change the position of the baseball bat because it looks like it is falling behind the table.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: JohannaContryman on November 04, 2016, 01:31:34 pm

I like it and it is very cool but, I think you could have zoomed in on your objects more.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: RAZirbes on November 04, 2016, 12:15:13 pm

Good work on all of those original textures.

Title: Re: My Still Life
Post by: Ezequiel Najera on November 04, 2016, 12:13:17 pm

try to decrease the lighting in the room it will make the light from the lamp show up better.

Title: My Still Life
Post by: astrid_cid on November 04, 2016, 12:09:58 pm

https://goo.gl/photos/dR3Jzrca81wR1Fee6 (https://goo.gl/photos/dR3Jzrca81wR1Fee6)