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General Category => Turn in => Topic started by: Brett Westenfield on November 03, 2016, 07:20:23 pm
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I think from a technical standpoint (e.g. modeling, texturing, knowledge of the program) I'd say you're very proficient. From an artistic standpoint the image leaves a lot to be desired in terms of visual interest. The issue, after a couple minutes of thinking it over, is that the table looks artificially populated. By that I mean that it looks like the contents weren't placed during natural use, due to a lack of objects and their relative placement. A good tip would be to imagine yourself as a character using this scene. Where would you put things down when you were done with them? Overall, I think it's well done, but is just missing something I can't really figure out.
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All the objects are modeled very well it's very clear what they are, however this scene doesn't like grab my attention. maybe different placement of the objects and different lighting would interest the viewer more; overall wonderful job fam!
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Maybe have your gas mask propped up because I wasn't sure what it was at first. Also the barrel of the gun looks a little short and the stock a little long.
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I think you could've toned down your wall texture a little more
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So this my still life the objects i used is a Medicine bottle, Crescent wrench, Screwdriver, Tool box, Rifle, and Gas mask. Originally there was a poster on the wall but i didn't have enough time to finish it, plus i didn't have a copy of Photoshop.
LINK: http://brett-westenfield.deviantart.com/art/Still-life-643838645?ga_submit_new=10%253A1478223613