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General Category => Turn in => Topic started by: AGolden on October 31, 2016, 02:18:35 pm

Title: Re: Comic book introduction
Post by: RAZirbes on November 01, 2016, 12:01:23 pm

The squash-stretching on that box is good for a toony vibe.

Title: Re: Comic book introduction
Post by: Nissa T on November 01, 2016, 08:16:30 am

I think this looks very neat! A part that bugs me is the camera angle at the end of the animation. I usually enjoy a dynamic angle such as this one but I don't believe that it is fitting for this situation. It looks as if the words that pop out of the comic book might be important. Maybe try a camera angle that looks straight on the comic book. Maybe you can start with the camera angle that you currently have and then pan over to look directly down at the book. Something to indicate that the words are important and that the viewer should pay attention to what they say! otherwise this is really cool! I enjoy watching it!

Title: Comic book introduction
Post by: AGolden on October 31, 2016, 02:18:35 pm

here is a comic book intro that I made for a video productions student:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IcCYg7U3tg